Evaluation for Final Major project
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Talk
about your Brain storms
For this project I put all the
thing I have learnt in last past few month on the brain storm. I tried to
consider the whole things as a short film needs such as film researches
(primary and secondary) , short film element, film story, locations, shooting elements (shots,
wide shot, long shot, close up) ,
Editing process (import editing,
export), film genre (documentary), and film mode (poetic mode, surreal black
and white).
I first did some researched about
my genre because it was a new genre. I was going to be more familiar with this
new genre and it elements and then started to do my brain storm. I did my
survey to my audience after that.
I researched about the genre for
this project (documentary genre). I had few different kinds of genre which were
related to each other so I researched in the YouTube and google. I
first researched about documentary genre
then poetic surreal mode.
I did my primary research by going to few places in Nottingham and take pictures and do examination shots from my locations. I went to Arburtorn park few time and I did shooting from my locations(from nature, from birds and flowers). I went to see the my location and I made shore this is location which it is going to be match with my genre (poetic surreal genre).
secondly I went to the brush mark car parking. I went to the a little office and I got permission from the back of the car park building. I filmed from the back of car park building to the side of the broad marsh street.
I went to the town and I filmed from public (from people). I also filmed from few other locations as example which they were for my primary research.
Secondary research
I researched about my genre from internet first . i researched about documentary genre from google and you tube. I researched by using the library books.
Then I reached about the Poetic mode and surreal mode from google and from the book which they exist in the college library. I red the books it was about the black and white cinema and the first director which they had made the surrealism film in the Paris, they are the Salvador dally(painter artist) and Luis Bunuel his colleague.
I did my survey by asking from audience the what is their interest(psychographic) about the documentary genre.
surreal mode
I researched about surreal mode from you tube and i watched few films. I understood meaning of art movement that is the first kind surreal mode (black and white).
poetic mode
I researched about poetic mode from google. poetic mode and surreal mode are link to each other in same time inventing. This has been a controversial genre in 1920 since it become part of cinema.
I think I could follow the schedule
time step by step in this project but I changed my genre and I made a new proposal
and I tried to adapt the last one to new one.
After the research I made a
proposal for a Documentary (a poetic surreal mode). I was going to make a short
documentary, later I added two other new kinds of mode with it. I wrote my
proposal with documentary contents. I mentioned the genre, technical element, locations,
locations and other things a short film needs.
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Discuss
what was helpful
It was helpful to know the kind
of research. About the primary research and secondary research. Primary
research and secondary research was helpful. I researched about the Salvador
Dali work and some Iranian director as the primary research. I went to
different locations in the town to see and photograph from the locations and
they were helpful as well.
I am able to write screen story as I did in my last project(green screen project). I am confident to imagine the genre and character which they want to play in a film. I can create story.
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what was helpful and not
I think for this project it was
important that everything look more professional. I think I was able to
understand what I am going to do. I researched about the documentary genre. I
researched about the poetic surreal mode which this genre relates to the
documentary genre. I could understand about the history of this genre. I could
understand about the kind of art and art movement. I understood about the
poetic mode as the new modern art which made a big revolution in the 20 century
by the inventions of Salvador Dali and
his friends.
I think there was not enough or
good information about the poetic surreal mode in the internet or properly I
could not find the good information. I tried from college library as well there were
good book but they looked like a little old.
I tried to see some poetic film from internet( YouTube) and that was helpful. I watched the Taste of cherry.
I did the primary research and
secondary research. I researched the secondary research first from the internet
(google and YouTube) and then researched from outside in my locations as the
primary research. My locations were in the Nottingham town centre and TV studio
in the college.
It was helpful because I knew about documentary genre but I did know
much about the poetic mode and surreal
mode. I realised they are the part of the cinema art which are related to
each other.
My target audience are students.
Their ages are between the 16 to 20. To find out who are my audience I put
my questions in the survey and a got a response from them. I asked them a demographic
and psychographic questions,
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Demographic
I asked their ages and who are living with. I wanted to know who is going
to be watching my short film.
I asked them about their interest. I asked what they are going to choice
for their final major project like photography, film producing, graphic,
animations and other parts.
- How did you produce your work?
First of all I researched about my genre (Poetic mode, surreal mode).
I researched about the different films which have been made in the 1920
to 1940.
I did my primary research and also secondary research.
I mentioned my idea on the paper in a brainstorm. I wrote about the idea and how I could
develop it into a short film.
After that I put my proposal in the blog.
I mentioned the film genre, film element and kind of shots.
I chose my locations which part of them was in the college and one of
them was in the TV studio in the
college.
When I finished my filming, I put all of my work in the Adobe premiere cc
and I started to edit. I was going to make a kind of black and white short film
(poetic surreal short film) for this project so I turned my video to black and
white first.
I added the transition effect (cross dissolve, deep to black, and
credit).
I recorded my voice from the TV studio in the recording room. I imported
my audio voices to the my editing window
source sound and then I edited my sound by adding over to my music sound.
I added music sound to my editing and also I edited them to the film
story.
I had good and enough experience for this project. I had enough experience
for filming and editing so I felt more confident. I think it was really helpful
when I knew enough about all the parts of the process of making a short film
and it helped me to work properly.
I
used the adobe premiere cc for this project.
I used the effect translon.
I made poetic surreal short film
for this project.
I used the transition effect, I used the tint to change the video to black and white.
I exported my work when I finished my editing.
I like this project because I think I was confident to work with the
camera and editing.
I think I could do better work for this project but I am satisfied about
my work.
I would use a different genre and
I would use the actors in my film.
I was confident to work independently. I was confident to make a plan to
be creative, to use the different shots to edit and make my work good.
I
followed my proposal for this project however I changed my idea one time. I
followed the schedule but I think I could be us a schedule.
Feedbacks
Serra
I really like your video, the music in the background. Fits well with the video and I liked how you have included interesting transitions and effects.
Jeremy Angels
The film was well filmed, I really liked the film. It had meaning to it. I like it.. very good.
Isaac Jonson
It is very good film. It is excellent camera shots. Excellent voice over. Excellent voiceover. Excellent editing (good job).
My conclude from feedback
For this project I was going to make a documentary short film. I was going to make a short documentary film about the homelessness and homeless people. in during the time I was looking for a actor or actress but no body accepted in the class to be as a player for a homeless role .
When I discussed about my final major short film subject whit tutor she said homeless issue is a sensitive issue.
I thought about the poetic mode genre and I decided to make a surreal poetic documentary about the part of my life story in the UK. When I was making this short film and looked the around, I felt I am looks like a little mezrible person in this short film as the main of subject . I thought it was better to make a short poetic film but about the other subject no about my life because it is embracing a little.
I made my short poetic surreal documentary about the kind of questions which had in my mind and finished it eventually.
when I finished my short film, I represented to my audience (students) and I got some feed back from them.
When they were watching my short film, I asked them about the my short film story and its features. It got some remarkable reaction from two of them which it make a controversial thing in my mind and I thought about it a lot.
One of them said is your short film story a fiction?
It was remarkable for me when heard this. It remained me my first idea which was about the homelessness and homeless people . In that time I was thinking to make a short film about homeless people because I though the society (my audience ) mind is far from this issue and forget it . I wanted to feature this issue somehow. I thought their is big gap between the homeless people and even ordinary people(middle class).I thought however people are accepted which homelessness is part of society problem this days but they think that is not their issue and homeless people are too far from their life.
This feedback from one of students remained me my pervious idea. I think their is a similarity between the my second idea which it is about my life and the first idea that it was about the homelessness.
It was interesting for me and I learned a new thing after this project. I suggest there are a lots of issues in the society and people are far from them.
I am tray to say properly majority of people think all of hard issues In the society is possibly kinds of fiction. They properly just hear from news everyday or observe in the society( in the street). I mean they can not feel it because they have never experienced those .
most of people think, we should be looking after our life so this make a huge gap between people mind with who they are involved in the problems.
My consequence:
I am happy to show part of my life story however I wasn't, because I think this short film would give more information to the audience to remind them there are a lots of realistic issue around us but we just cross it everyday and they become as fiction because it has been repeating without the solutions for them.
My genre for this short film was poetic surreal documentary.